Wednesday, 31 March 2010

Ari Viderci Poetry Battle

My final word is: LIES

Lies on the couch, and she lies to her self
I don't need therapy, I don't need help
She blocks out her friends and forgets to believe
And I wish I could tell her the words that she needs

Shane's final word is: NEEDS

I guess this marks the end of our battle, so thanks for reading. It was an interesting experience, having to sit for a few moments each day and just make a poem off the top of my head. I think I learned a little bit about myself, which is very corny.

I don't know, I guess we both win! But Shane still has one poem to go.


  1. I don't think we really set out to have winners/losers in the first place. Although I think your poetry is far more graceful than mine. I certainly seem to always take the ugly side of things. It's not a bad thing though, is it?

  2. Winners and Losers are inherent in the word Battle, compadre!

    And it's certainly ironic considering that you're the happy happy annoying sunshine boy and I'm always miserable! :)

  3. I reckon, hey. My writing persona and my actual real world persona are completely different. Am I... Am I bipolar?


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